Thank you for your thoughts! I agree that there wasn't many stakes or a hook. It's one of the biggest problems I've had with the story looking back. I wish I had more scenes of the wolf and the main character not getting along at first. That would be the first thing I'd like to change once I get the opportunity to change the script.
I'm happy to know that you enjoyed the writing as well as the character writing. My writing has been quite since rusty, since I haven't written in years. I'll keep your review in mind for the future.
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