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Yup. Scarle is too tall for an option. Selen Daft Punk is meant to be in the second column. I guess I could have fit it in the previous one, but whatevs.
All songs there were in Ninisanni Scenario 1, so they came preunlocked.
Thanks for checking on this stuff though.

The fix is up for the small Get A Job! bug in the Todolist screen. But it doesn't really affect anything other than coming a bit early, so there's you don't need to download it.

You don't need to, but if you wanna help me out, can you note down typos in a notepad and then send them to me when you finish the game? I can easily find them, all you have to do is type the incorrect line.
Of course, there shouldn't be any typos (or bugs for that matter), given how much I've playtested the game, but we all know how it goes with writing.

DiGreatDestroyer166 days ago(+1)

Sure! I may take some time though, because I want to savour it!

So far, let me say that the opening with Reimu was superb, already worth the download and the wait! Very well written, dialogue, tone, theme, and character-choice wise! Sprite usage shines yet again!

In just that segment, I caught these sentences that had what felt like oddities to me: “But the hall is clean on all over aspects.” “The blood on the wall get you.” “I like what make her, her."

dullachan166 days ago(+2)

And here I thought I left typo town... Three in one scene!? Thanks for letting me know.

Anywho, take your time, enjoy yourself and have fun. Don't worry too much about the typos to the point where you're taking yourself out of the experience, you know?

DiGreatDestroyer166 days ago(+1)

Played a bit more, found these: “I’d tweet that thing like no tommorow”, “I could accept this rejection pacefully”, “It’s over when the when the pee colored wallpaper run red with blood..." “…I’ve personally been using them in a very hetrosexual manner”.

I also wanted to ask, is the Kotoka/Meloco scene meant to trigger that early? I got it after the first free-roam event I saw (visiting Selen, then going backrooming with Millie.)

dullachan166 days ago(+2)

Yep. Don't worry about it. New characters get introduced on Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday Morning. You work in the afternoon (depending your job, there are different days you work), have fun in the evening, and then a couple nights of the week you can engage in fetish play with the harem.

DiGreatDestroyer166 days ago(+1)

I can see the pattern, just got through the Maria introduction - and ran into the first inconsistency, I think. On the first free-roam, I had the chance to go hang out with Selen, then talk to Millie, then run away from Rosemi. That leads into the backrooms scene, and in the ensuing events MC makes references to Asmodeus and The Root, which I just wrote off as references fans in the know would get. But then in the Maria introduction scene, she mentions both and kinda introduces them to MC, which leads me to think that the logical order the scenes should show in is "Maria introduction that introduces the concepts" ---> "Backdoor scene that recalls them". Did you write them in that order and then shuffled them around perhaps? Or was it a bit of an oversight that the player can get one scene without having seen the other?

(Also, another typo: “I came across Petra napping on the grass by the street out by the street…”)

dullachan160 days ago(+2)

Nah, that Asomedeus and The Root stuff is just an external reference. I don't remember when it gets referenced in the backrooms, but it's probably because Millie is a witch and a bit tied to the occult. Just a general reference.

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