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I came away from this with one strong impression: this felt a lot like playing Small Talk: The VN. I don't feel like this is necessarily to be attributed to the game belonging to the Slice of Life genre. Usually in SoL the game at least focuses on the lives of the characters. The uniqueness of Beginning Anew with You is that all the talk is pretty weightless: there is a lot of talk about videogames, pets, music, etc.

It is pretty well written though! I kind of like the beginning of the story, where the small talk fills the function of depicting the MC approaching the wolf and breaking the ice with him. I just wish something a bit more substantive had followed these initial interactions.

The elements are all there though: the writing and the presentation were effective, I just wasn't a big fan of the story.

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Thank you for reading.

I would like to go back and revise the script. Reading back on it I realize that there's not much going on in the story. Nothing of value really happens. I had plans to do more, but I didn't have enough time. I would have liked to have more scenes of the main character and the wolf not getting along. At least there would have been character development.  I have to concur with everyone's feedback that there is more to be desired. I just hope I can deliver once the game jam is over.