This is very insightful! As someone whose main language isnt English, we would need all the help we can get. And to be honest, after a while, some words start to blur so these corrections are huge. Thanks!
We will implement these on the next update.
Edit: For the music, you can find the artists on on the credits to see their work. But we are working on something custom that we will be uploading in the future.
- Roda -
honestly, i know people who's only language is english and yet are quite... lacking, let's say. for a non-native speaker and a game in development, the writing is holding up just fine.
anyways, i got through runan (my beloved) and have compiled my findings in a google doc, which you can get to here. if you have trouble navigating the document, let me know! i'll update it whenever i get to the other (ridge is up next!) routes as well as backtrack to days 1-6. as a key thing, a lot of my comments are very nitpicky -- if a change doesn't make sense or does not fit the story, ignore it! i won't be hurt :)
again, i love the story and art in this game. perhaps i should get into monster hunter, but that's another time. you've got something awesome here and i'm excited for what you have cooking!
