Cool little story, i like the premise, but since it feels like it really just started its hard to say weather it turns out to be cool or not.
I think the atmosphere is setup nicely and the sounds enrich the experience, i love the jucy button click sound effect! Also really liked the philosophical mid section about when errors become so complex that we build complex systems to find them, which in turn themselfels become susceptible to errors until noone understands any of them anymore.