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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Visuals | #13 | 4.111 | 4.333 |
| Audio | #13 | 3.689 | 3.889 |
| Overall | #27 | 3.479 | 3.667 |
| Originality | #31 | 3.584 | 3.778 |
| Fun Factor | #56 | 2.846 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Is your game a video game or a physical game?
video game
Was your game made solo or in a team?
solo
Did you use any third party assets, if yes what assets did you use?
I've used public domain sound effects from freesound.org
Did you choose from one (or more) of the optional secondary themes?
Signal Failure
Does your game contain 18+ content (Nudity, Gore, Language)?
No
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That is so awesome, I loved it!!! That atmosphere was so darn good, the visuals are really cool and the writing is stellar! The actual only bad thing is that it ended, it actually annoyed me lol. I cannot wait to see more!!!
Thank youuuu! Getting the atmosphere right was the priority for now!
quite fascinating and inspiring, like a lost pc98 game ;)
yeesss thank you, that's exactly what I was aiming for!
Holy shit I absolutely loved that! The atmosphere of it all instantly captured me, the writing and worldbuilding dragged me even further in. I honestly can't wait for the rest.
Thank you u! At first I was afraid it wasn't mech enough but this gives me new confidence in working on it! I also saw the VOD of you playing it last night, thank you so much for playing on stream!
That was so interesting! I love the atmosphere of the game and its mysterious aura. I really hope you will continue it to see more!
Thank youuu <3!
Interesting point and click adventure. Intro scene was nicely done. Would like to see more interactive elements. Was a little confused on what was happening.
Thank you for playing and for your feedback!
Very nice! I love the premise and am curious to see where the story goes. Everything feels pretty well polished and as you said, just needs some more time for more story and content. Definitely feels very relevant with how things are going with AI these days.
Thank youuuu! Yes, the AI talk has been a great inspiration for this I want it to play a role in the story!
Cool little story, i like the premise, but since it feels like it really just started its hard to say weather it turns out to be cool or not.
I think the atmosphere is setup nicely and the sounds enrich the experience, i love the jucy button click sound effect! Also really liked the philosophical mid section about when errors become so complex that we build complex systems to find them, which in turn themselfels become susceptible to errors until noone understands any of them anymore.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the atmosphere and the sound. Like you said now it comes the hardest part for me, figuring out how to develop the premise into action or combat, which are a bit hard to portray in a visual novel, but I'll try!