Pretty composition its well arranged good job. I think your percussions can get some work in terms of mix they can go way harder than that. I don,t know why but Storms Clouds feels unfinished, I want more at the end.
I went to bed last night with at least 10 different ideas with what I could do to take Storm Clouds further. But, that’s part of the jam. Work with the limited time you’ve got. Thanks for the kind words!