Thats a methodical, extensive way of saying « you got much to learn kiddo » and I’m 1000% here for it ❤️
Thank you for the superb review, this is EXACTLY what I was hoping for! Some things you said I was sure would be picked apart by someone as it bothered me, like the volume difference for example, I still have ways to go understanding volume from dynamics from expression in the context of using VST’s and a lot of other comments are gold.
I’ll definitely work on a new version with your input and some other things as well ( I had a whole other section that I had to strip because the lack of time). I also feel that there’s an overall lack of movement, all phrases being 8 bars. I’d like to have just a bit of variety maybe with some bridges between some phrases, etc.
I also have to look at how to do decent arpeggios with the tools I have because I’m just too bad at piano for now to do it myself ahahah.
Would you consider going for another listening round after the changes? I would love your input!
Thank you for all the kind words of encouragement, this is super new to me so it feels nice to see that I’m on the right track at least!