Thank you so much, this is my first composition & orchestration with a month of experience and only had saturday and sunday to work on it. I was sad that I had to cut 2 whole phrases and a few bridges I had in mind, as well as being forced to copy paste some parts around at some point.
You're the second person telling me about this, and I'm definitely updating Tsuya a bit later to make sure I can clean it up with all the awesome feedback.
Thank you for the criticism, I am really looking forward to implement all these feedbacks I'm getting and grow!