Great music! The harmony in the beginning does well to capture a sense of childlike wonder and intrigue, and the orchestration fits the picture well. It would fit really well into a game, complementing and letting the art breathe. If I could offer one piece of constructive criticism, it would be to change up the chord pattern a bit, just to add some more obvious contrast, although I understand it's a main theme and shouldn't be too complicated. Great work!
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Thank you so much, this is my first composition & orchestration with a month of experience and only had saturday and sunday to work on it. I was sad that I had to cut 2 whole phrases and a few bridges I had in mind, as well as being forced to copy paste some parts around at some point.
You're the second person telling me about this, and I'm definitely updating Tsuya a bit later to make sure I can clean it up with all the awesome feedback.
Thank you for the criticism, I am really looking forward to implement all these feedbacks I'm getting and grow!