Very nice use of textured sounds and arrangement to make the song feel wide and lush!
Personally, I feel the mix and master didn't keep up with the composition of the song. Percussive elements like hihats were a bit too soft and the bass was hard to hear. It might've even been fighting with the pads. These are all things you'll eventually learn to solve, but I think taking some time to balance (especially pads and bass together!) can help these kinds of songs to become absolute galaxies of sounds. Also, adding a limiter to bump up the volume overall would help too. Great job and good luck!