Damn, I love what you did, something rhapsodic like that...with instruments coming and going, some pretty sophisticated chords, lines, key changes...really beautiful AND on point with the theme. An whole soundtrack like could be a bit nauseous, but if done with enough talent I swear it would be better than the original one.
Just a minus, I think you overdid it between 2:17 and 2:20, off course I like atonality, but it felt out of place at this spot, maybe some chromatic 4th stack (or something) would have make it.
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Woww, thank you so much!! It means a ton to hear you think this kind of piece could improve the soundtrack. I'm a big artcore fan, so I'm really glad 'change' was translating well for you, with my studying of it.
I have to agree, about 2:17-2:20, actually I was going to calm things down at 2:10, but decided to add an extra section to risk overcomposing for sake of learning and experimenting. It's neat you noticed that too, I think it would've helpd the song. And great suggestion on stacked 4ths, will keep that in mind.