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The link does work

The chords are quite nice but sometimes I really want the fourth chord to go down a bit to lead into the first chord again. I heard it happen I think once at 1:43 and it was great which is why I wanted more.

I also think the quiet guitar near the end sounded a bit off. 

lastly, I think there should just be more happening. as is it is kind of just chords for almost 3 minutes and if that's what you're going for then that's fine but even just some little flourishes here and there could add a lot.

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Thanks jofes for the thoughts! I'm not too good with theory but I do believe that I do the thing at 1:43 a few times throughout the song. Also, for the quiet guitar at the end, are you referring to the strummed guitar or the balalaika riff? The balalaika riff is something I'll probably work on a bit further. Also, I left a lot of space open in the song because there are going to be vocals added. I just haven't written the lyrics with the person I usually co-write with yet :) I might add in a few little flourishes, we'll see, I'm not particularly skilled at guitar so I kept it fairly simple.


Thanks!

Ah if there are going to be vocals then that makes sense. I do not know if it is the strummed guitar or the balalaika riff I just know that it was quiet and came in near the end

Ok, gotcha. Either way I'll workshop it :)