I have to clear my queue to rate it, but this was a smart story (with just few grammar and stylistical mistakes). It reminded me of the movie "Expendables" ;). My summarized rating: 4 / 5.
Because of work I was not able to sumbit my story in time, but here it is: Mysteries are not dead! by Ormrin Sinkalte Ged - Sparrowhawk (itch.io) . Feel free to read it, rate it and comment it - anyone from you, readers!:)
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Thanks for your rating.
As you pointed out, there were quite a few mistakes on my part when it came to grammar. This has never happened before and I am deeply ashamed. To receive such a high rating from you feels unreal, thanks again!
I also see that I can't access your story. May be because of the queue...
English is also a secondary language for you like it is for me? Anyway, I was not playing being an English teacher, but I was just ejoying your smart story. In Discord, I quoted to what I reacted "LOL+WOW". I forgot to set my story to Public, which I just repaired - thank you for hinting me.
By the way, I am from the country, which is producing the best beer on this planet (but I am an abstinent, so I do not know that from my own experiences). What about if I will offer you, that i will send you the best beer(s) in exchange of your proofreading of my text(s)?!:)
Then what about the best thick-sauce-with-meat (in a can to be sent by Post office) you ever tasted? I mean czech goulash.
And yes please, proofreading would be very helpful. I am even offering you prety payments. And my services - I have also another abilities than "just" the high awareness which you witnessed.
So far, I finished just 2 more stories because I was de facto proofreading them including quoting mistakes in my comments. I already gave just 3/5 to one author (https://itch.io/jam/oprwj11/rate/2904942) in an appropriate category, because of kind of confusing concept (which was not your problem:)).