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I kept having to go back and check which Warden was who. For example when one of them stood with their greatsword out I liked that imagery, then two more readied warhammers. Then a fourth (that I had forgotten about) swung his warhammer in combat but because I went from the warhammers and the fourth didn't have their names my first thought was "wait, didn't he have a sword?" So I had to skip back to confirm names and numbers. 

It's possible that I didn't pick up enough on the unique aspects of each character which is why I struggled. On its own I wouldn't worry too much about what I'm saying, get a broader perspective.

If most people follow just fine then the issue is with me and not your writing ;)

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Nah these are great points. I recall going through the Eternal Wardens' list and finding the great sword upgrade (Malek's weapon) and then saw that the remaining two could have dual warhammers. In retrospect I probably should have made more definition between the characters and given Aleric, who is supposed to be an Eternal Lord, a more unique weapon too.

There's definitely something to be said for the way two warhammers look great on a mini, but sound ridiculous in prose.

Nah, I'm happy with the warhammers in general. It takes a lot to throw off my suspension of belief. I honestly loved the greatsword inclusion too. The atmosphere was good, there were good interactions between the Wardens. I could genuinely see they were a close-knit unit. Loved how the seeing stone completely backfired too, I'm a fan of situations where characters are like "ok, let's get out quietly...........balls." and you really delivered there.