I really liked the look of the map but it was kind of hard to read unless really zoomed in. Not sure why there was a page dedicated to a Merchant class, would have preferred more dungeon info personally. Overall really enjoyed the vibes of this adventure.
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Thanks. I was fighting time and didn't have the time to rescan/color the map when I realized how it compressed into the PDF. As to the merchant, I wasn't able to include much commentary due to space limitations, but I had a solid reasoning to add it as a way to expand options and enhance elements of the adventure. I wanted to offer more options on how to resolve things for those who didn't decide to seek out the ruins. If you're interested in more information, I included a link at the end of the document to a page where I discuss at length some of my decisions such as the inclusion of the Merchant Class.