The monster art at the end is awesome. Most of the maps were nice, though I did find it hard to read the grids on some of them (faint). The layout overall flowed with the story. I did find the indentation, especially with the bullet points took me out of wanting to be emersed in the story you were trying to convey. The Moongrasp, Mine, and Shrine of Pines Abbey were very nicely done. I appreciate the hand-drawn maps!