This has some real seeds for an entire adventure in it, and that is a good thing on many levels. It stays in the players minds, instead of completing and being forgotten. The whimsical creativity on display is what really inspires. The layout could use some polishing and breaks to keep the text from bleeding...however, I learned a while back that it is the content that keeps people coming back, and this has that in spades. Refine the look a bit, and you will grab those that might rely on first glances or visual cues to grab interest, because there is some amazing stuff here! Terrific job!