Alright! Some may be me misreading things but here goes so far! everyone else look away from spoilers
-intro, 'purfume'
-Walking with Sinner in the woods, 'segway(tm)' instead of 'segue', either a word (probably 'hand' or 'arm') is missing in the bit where she puts it on the tree.
-Quest for In Light of the Seventh. Simmer and sinner might need swapping? Anyway for such a large amount of writing, its remarkable theres only so few typos (though getting clobbered with one right out the gate is a bit heheh)! Its all Ive found so far. Lovin the game and the weird offputting ladies therein.
Sinner's Apartment 'hans'-> 'hands'. 