Wow, that was really cool ! I'm really amazed about how good you are as a storyteller. The art is awesome, it's a lot of fun and everything worked perfectly.
To be really a little picky, I would say that the controls on some mini games are not really straightforward (or maybe I'm dumb?). I'm thinking of the "water scooping" mini game which needed some times for me to realize that WASD keys were not gonna work ahah.
But really that was a wonderful game, very funny.