WOW very nice! Really liked the creative, unique mechanics with time and the weather, I thought it was very relevant to the theme. The text throughout even has a bit of interesting simple narrative and is also very effective at indicating to the player what to do. All done without resorting to overtly long or boring text on some random note you find or arbitrary piece of paper you pick up, but instead using engaging short dialogue.
I thought the short length of the game is also a PLUS actually - really nice job. I find this to be one of the best submissions for this jam, exceptional job on coming up with something like this. It's also visually very pleasing, the parallax and other things really add to the visual appeal. The audio is also really great, and the controls work very well and feel very smooth.
Nice job on this!