I really enjoyed it, If this is your second IF, I am really looking forward to seeing what you'll do once you really get a handle on the tools. I was happy about reading a story about an artificial intelligence that doesn't follow the Frankenstein-mold, where the AI work with humans rather than against them. The writing reminded me a bit of Choicescript games, and I couldn't help but think this is a concept that'd work well with Choice Of Games stat-system. I liked how the story gave a snapshot of the life of this colony, in a relatively brief time, you get a good idea of how life in the colony must be and what sort of decisions they face.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad you liked it - I know it was a little human-heavy for the brief, but I thought about a few other ideas and this was the only one that really grabbed me. I'm also a fan of benevolent AI.
I'm still trying out different tools and figuring out which ones work for me. I did like working with inklewriter, but it's still in beta and I had some issues with incorporating images, which I initially intended to do. Maybe I'll give ChoiceScript a try next time!