This was a nice story, felt quite easy to read and enjoy. An issue i encountered was when setting the game to fullscreen, my cursor dissapeared and had to constantly alt tab until i could get to the windowed option again. The handles for the sliders are not transparent so they look a bit weird hiding part of the slider bar. The music was also very loud, might want to lower the default levels a bit. I found the fact that the characters all looked wildly different odd at first but after learning more of the world it made sense. The artstyle overall was very unique and works quite well for this story. The characters are very static though, only swapping a few poses but nothing else happening in the scene. I also liked the between place filling with the faces as you went between areas, nice little touch. The ambience and music really fit well to it, was really well done!
Overall a nice game, good work!