Is this perfection? I do think a few qualifying words could be cut, but that's such a minor critique compared to the creativity and design on display. Everything is nailed down so well from the art to the map and layout. This is one of those adventures that makes me jealous and inspired to create better things. Bravo.
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Thank you so much! You are way way too kind!
I completely agree with you regarding the qualifying words – if I were to ever do a version 2.0, I'd definitely do another pass on the entire text.
But I'm really happy that my adventure inspires you – that's just about the best outcome I could have hoped for!