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A very caring father, doting on his fish daughter child. Sometimes, he wants to shove himself down the sink?!

This was a fun little story. The art style shift between the walking sprites and the illustrated character sprites makes me giggle. The interactions were comical, and I really enjoyed the exploration and puzzles. The demo was a nice treat! I wish there was a little note about an intention to develop further/to be continued, because at first I thought the game crashed hehe.

Really nice work. I would agree that the writing could use some proofreading and editing, but it didn't heavily impact my experience playing! Looking forward to the full game!

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Thank you! Drawing the sprites was super fun (drawing crazy/???'s butt was super silly but probably my fav part, not sure why i did that), I'm glad you liked them!

I did add lots of bits and pieces here and there to try and make things make more sense after the playtest, hopefully it helped clear things up.  I agree proofreading and having a "end of demo" note would have made things better.

Can I ask which parts seemed confusing or needed more editing?

There were just some lines that either had typos or some lines of dialogue that could have the grammar corrected, minor writing issues! There were a few, just scattered throughout. But again, did not keep me from thoroughly enjoying the storyline and demo!