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Thank you! Drawing the sprites was super fun (drawing crazy/???'s butt was super silly but probably my fav part, not sure why i did that), I'm glad you liked them!

I did add lots of bits and pieces here and there to try and make things make more sense after the playtest, hopefully it helped clear things up.  I agree proofreading and having a "end of demo" note would have made things better.

Can I ask which parts seemed confusing or needed more editing?

There were just some lines that either had typos or some lines of dialogue that could have the grammar corrected, minor writing issues! There were a few, just scattered throughout. But again, did not keep me from thoroughly enjoying the storyline and demo!