I can tell you typically write classic or orchestra pieces. Its great you expanded to new instruments. I kind of wish their were more moments for less tension and to let the melodies and other structures breath but other wise well done!
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Yes, I do! What you mention is something I haven't solved yet. Because of the harsh sound, making long notes didn't sound good, so I couldn't lower the tension as you say. But I agree with what you said. Now I think that some pauses or moments with fewer voices would have helped. Thank you so much for the feedback! (still waiting for the space train simulator)