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Thank you for sharing the game! I'll start with the positives.

Positives:

1. I really enjoyed your vision for visual style in games. I also followed the link to some of your other works on Steam and noticed that you have a unique approach to narrative and visual storytelling, something reminiscent of biopunk. Your games are pure art!
2. The story is very interesting. It’s quite simple, yet you add details elegantly, like the setting in space, the futuristic society that doesn’t tolerate the weak, and the mysterious void entity overtaking the boy's mind. There’s a lot left unsaid, which leads to thoughtful reflection—very impressive.
3. The music creates tension. At times, I felt the music was a bit too quiet or subdued, but it seemed to shift tone towards the end, adding to the atmosphere. The sound design is well done.
4. The gameplay is arcade-like, and though I died a few times (mainly missing mines), I have no issues with it. I think you prioritized telling a story over complex gameplay, which I appreciate.

Negatives:

1. I would have liked a bit more variety in enemies, maybe even a boss at the end. I’d also suggest a mechanic where the character gains new abilities, like a wave attack that destroys all enemies nearby, which would fit the narrative well. I missed having more of a challenge, but maybe the point was to show the protagonist’s dominance over enemies.
2. Although I praised the music, I found myself unable to recall it by the end of the game. I think more distinct musical cues could make a lasting impression. Or maybe I just have a memory problem :)

Conclusion: This is a small game with an intriguing and unsettling story. I enjoyed playing it and appreciated the minimal yet effective storytelling style. Unlike other games, it’s not heavy-handed; you provide just the right amount of information, which I truly value. Thank you for making this game—I loved it!