-The control are quite complex so I think you should always have them showing on the screen
-The hold shift for flying is not really good when I just want to fly.
-No idea how to use weapon
-It is never too soon to make the DA and the sound effect. You should take a little time to do them. It is fun and having your game look and sound better is always good for the motivation. Please don't to giant industrial/desert like armored core, do something unique.
-You are advanced enough for a fanart.
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