I am a little sad that you pretty much just did slender. But you did a really good job doing slender so I have to give you a fairly good rating. My sister came in and played it and her biggest critique is that there really needs to be some indication of wide Fauna's presence. Otherwise it's just too easy for her to sneak up on you and end it.
I am also biased against it, I just don't like this style of game.
You did really good!