I liked the environment and the storytelling.
The platforming was also pretty good. I think I only encountered one jump that was a bit tight, but probably because I was fighting the camera control.
I like that you can have an "alternate ending" if you immediately touch magenta Fauna. Speaking of ending, I played the web version and it kinda just stops where I assume is the end of the game.
I hope you consider expanding it with more levels and other movement mechanics after the jam. It would be interesting to see.
Overall a nice and short platforming game with a narrative. Good job!