I really like the idea of being just the "courier" instead of a "standard fantasy hero", I think you did a good job on the writing too.
Some feedback to consider: I think the field of view is a little low for a first person game. Pressing menu while playing teleported be back to the horse. I guess I wasn't looking in the right direction when my character noticed the "lady in red" so it took a while to find her, thankfully you have the boy mention she's in the woods. Locking and hiding the mouse cursor when walking around look and feel better. Best of luck with developing the game further! :)
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Hi, thanks for your kind words and great feedback.
I was unsure about the FOV too, and will try a broader perspective that feels less like you're viewing the world via a looking glass. My game tester/girlfriend also missed The Lady in Red on her first attempt, so you're probably right about fixing the view at her direction when she appears. As for teleportation, thanks so much for noticing it as I haven't while testing, will look into it.
I haven't been able to work on this project for a while due to life stuff, but your comment was quite encouraging, so thanks a bunch!