Hey there Emperor! Not bad at all, I do think you went a bit a off rails with the theme, but there is still some essence there.
I gotta say that middle section was risky and interesting, got you an extra star on creativity from me :)
The mix has good dynamic range, but I believe you could work a bit on the instrument placement, it could have been just aiming at something completely different, this jam was all about creativity, so take this feedback with a grain of salt.
Keep on grinding and ask stuff on the discord channel to grow, I know everybody there is always eager to help each other out :)