Some cool composition ideas here, keep it up!

This song has an intensity to it. IMO the mallets at 0:44 were a bit too loud for the mix.

Interesting composition.

I think the sound is still kind of on the midi side of things with the real instruments. The mix is still quite crunched together in a way.

Good work overall though!

Certainly an interesting track. Composed fairly well despite being a bit repetitive. The mixing could use some work, there's not a lot of clarity in the dynamic and the track seems quite cold and soft, not a lot of heat or soft clipping where there could have been some, even seemingly lacking in compression.

Nice work though.

really interesting switch up at the ~35-second mark.  sounds good

Hey there Emperor! Not bad at all, I do think you went a bit a off rails with the theme, but there is still some essence there.

I gotta say that middle section was risky and interesting, got you an extra star on creativity from me :)

The mix has good dynamic range, but I believe you could work a bit on the instrument placement, it could have been just aiming at something completely different, this jam was all about creativity, so take this feedback with a grain of salt.

Keep on grinding and ask stuff on the discord channel to grow, I know everybody there is always eager to help each other out :)