Your choice of harmonies, textures and well-placed dissonance is nothing short of masterful. Very well done. This is so beautiful. You find a balance between grace and chaos and roll with it. The bassline is so engaging and interesting. Like other commenters have said, it's a bit quiet and the mixing needs some work. It's got a lot of highs and mid-highs and that bass needs to be louder and fuller. There are a ton of lows and low-mids in your piano and bass that could be making the song feel "full" but I feel like they're being repressed. Regardless of the EQ the composition is beautiful and this was one of my favorite songs. It's got so much variation, every measure brings a new thing for my ears to eat. It never feels "stuck" and instead feels like it's telling an evolving story. I love it. Brilliant work!!
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Thank you so much for thaking the time to write your feedback, those words mean the world to me! :3
Did you listen to the BandCamp one? Still found it too quiet?
I totally agree on the mix feedback, I liked the the instrument placement overall but I think I should had gone wider and not repress the lows so much (which is clearly an overcompensation, as a bass player I tend to exagerate on the lows, mostly when recording stuff for the band xD)
Take care!