Okay, super cool track. I really like the intro especially at 30 secs with the little stick percussions from left to right really nice. Now the main part where the cresendo hits cymbals is a great choice but I think you can change symbals, something with more "crash" on it. For the strings, make them move, strings like to move more and since your melody and strings are pretty clustered like Turtlebox said its pretty muddy by default juste because of the arrangement, if you open the voicing of your strings, use some woodwinds to help the melodic part it will be fantastic. Good job !