It was cool to see how you took the theme from the jam and adapted it to a new story, really cool!

Like others mentioned, i agree with the muddiness.

What FoxHyode mentioned is solid advice, and it feels like some of the muddiness is also caused by the constant taiko drum. If you have a sample of a smaller taiko drum, maybe you could use that for the pulse of the rhythm and then use the bigger drum for emphasising the accents.

But the melodic/harmonic material itself is great, just with a bit tweaked arrangement/orchestration this could be even better.

Good job!

Really cool opening sequence. Absolutely loved it and had some really great atmosphere. I agree with the other comments from Turtlebox and the textures getting a little close elsewhere. Overall though, a really good composition!

Okay, super cool track. I really like the intro especially at 30 secs with the little stick percussions from left to right really nice. Now the main part where the cresendo hits cymbals is a great choice but I think you can change symbals, something with more "crash" on it. For the strings, make them move, strings like to move more and since your melody and strings are pretty clustered like Turtlebox said its pretty muddy by default juste because of the arrangement, if you open the voicing of your strings, use some woodwinds to help the melodic part it will be fantastic. Good job !

Good orchestration work, and the arpeggio also fascinated me.