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No no your English is great, the weirdness of the sentences is a feature not a bug. Your English is very poetic and half the fun of the game was figuring out like if storm was metaphorical or meant the lightning. That in my opinion is the coolest feature of the game.

To make it more clear what I was saying the balance between very clear and very confusing and weirdly worded instructions was a really fun balance it meant I couldn't tune out but had to keep focused on trying to solve what was happening. It kept it from becoming a rote puzzle game. If you were to go longer, I'd almost recommend leaning into the  weird phrasing.