The vibrant art is quite nice to look at; I like the stylized sprites, and the use of blurring adds a lot of depth to the CGs. Much of the specific vibe of the game is established thanks to the soft, colorful backgrounds, and the music's neat, too.
I guess I don't have much else to say. The game feels like a pretty straightforward romance/kink piece that knows what it's doing but doesn't really shake up the formula, not to mention being unfinished. There's maybe an argument for the pacing being a little too accelerated, though, especially towards the end of what's out now – in a genre that really thrives on little details and fun texturing, it does come off as slightly hurried. The writing is pretty strong and there are a lot of fun lines, but the storytelling is just kind of utilitarian. Also, as a pretty regular editing issue, there are a lot of missing periods and other punctuation.