Simply marvelous aesthetics! It was quite different from what I’m used to seeing, and it was undoubtedly a strong point
The story is clear, and I believe you captured the proposed action feeling very well. I saw that there were many more elements that ended up being cut, right? I would love to see them in a future project
The sounds were really great, truly. Despite the cuts, I’d say it’s a complete scene that does its job very well