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Cool entry, nice work!! I loved the twist ending when he pulls the knife out of his own back, thus saving the world, really caught me by surprise and made for a nice ending. The artstyle is really cool and easy on the eyes, the CRT effect especially was a nice touch. Color palette rocks too. Sound design and music is solid. My big critique was with the AGAIN! text popping up in between scenes. One of my pet peeves is when games (cutscenes in this case) spoon feed me information. I think if you cut those text transitions out and just showed the changes to the clock and our hero and let the viewer deduce for themselves that time is restarting it would make for a much more powerful watch. That way the viewer feels like they solved a puzzle rather than told something. But thats just my opinion. I thought this was a cool watch (no pun intended) with a neat premise and great execution. The art is stellar and the ending was too. Great job everybody!!

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Thank you so much for your feedback! :D 
I can tell by the way you made your scene that telling things in a subtle way is a big strength of yours. :D

I often had problems with some of my stories being too abstract for JAM-audience though (like tower of hearts). Thank you for watching!

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Aww thank you very much for the compliment lol, I really appreciate that. And I hear you about jams though it's tough to find a balance, and you probably made the right call about keeping things less abstract. Keep up the great work!!

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If u ever want to try an artistic project with subtle storytelling I would love to help out if u need art or music :D

I'd definitely be down!! Do you have discord?

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Yes! Are you on goedwares discord? Im Spamming the smalltalk there … ;)