Nice finished cutscene!
I understand it was challenging to make the text run automatically while staying within the timing constraints. It’s clear that this was tricky. The text does move quite quickly now, making it harder to keep an eye on the rest of the cutscene. Luckily, I could watch it multiple times.
The rain and smoke effects make it feel dynamic. Perhaps the characters could have done a bit more, like changing their posture or showing something above their heads during the conversation. At times, they were looking off-screen for a while, and nothing happened except for the text changing.
The use of bright colors worked well to draw attention to the main focus, with darker tones towards the edges, which helped direct the viewer’s eyes to the characters. That worked effectively.
Adding a few more sound effects/audio music could enhance it even further—even something simple, like a typewriter sound as the letters appear, could be a great bonus.
Overall, this is a solid cutscene entry for our jam. Nice job!