First of all, it was cool to see this artistic style, which gave the cutscene an unique identity. Cool dithering indeed.
Secondly, this cutscene could easily fit into a Wing Commander-style game as the start of an important mission, with music that gets you hyped for the action. Perhaps the music could start even earlier to give it some more build up.
A whole game in this style...would love to see it.
Definitely a strong cutscene entry for our jam. Well done!