i really liked the way you used the theme here, using different perspectives that build upon and add to one another and yet differ depending on what’s happened in the prior worlds/locations. that thoughts, the world, and even the events change depending on who becomes the pov character, even moreso when we take on the new perspective towards the end. brilliant incorporation of the theme! also loved the sprites, especially matt’s – dating sim when?! i don’t know much about art, but i think it’s very impressive to have three sets with such varying expressions!
i think your writing is so solid too, and it sets off to achieve exactly what it needs to. descriptive in the right parts and vague in others, all pulling together in a macabre yet touching storyline. i loved the beginning fading into black and the good ending fading into white! the contrast makes winning all the more sweeter, when it succeeds. amazing entry!