Very nicely done, I like the dynamics of the tracks, nice low end. The only thing for me that I would work is the staccato strings, it seems out of place in the mix and maybe in the song, I think the synth sound choice are super cool but the staccato high string and maybe the cello legato at the end that needs a bit of work either melodically or just the sound itself.
Might seem a brutal comment but since its unranked I went all in to give my opinion, so don't be offended by it seems alot but its a nice track overall :)