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Some items for your consideration:

Some typos for you:

Speaking with Nova
Me 'Yeah....this has definitely been going on for too long, been to detailed and felt too real so far for a mere dream.'
Probably should be '...been too detailed...'

Nova 'Krushna, a tall demaon...help out with manual labor, since she's strong...'
Probably should be '...labour...'

Nova 'Our staff is usually at one of the marked locations anyway.'
Probably should be '...staff are usually...'

In the Gym with Felicia
'she continues to purr, showing now sign of wanting you to stop.'
Probably should be '...showing no sign...'

At the beach with Emilia
Emilia 'The staff at the resort is busy most of thetime,and...'
Probably should be '...resort are busy...'

In kait room
Me 'Are all guest rooms here like that?'
Probably should be '...like this?'

Also;

The 'Me (thinking thought)' prompt doesn't feel right.
Perhaps you could try 'Me (thinking) instead or something else?