I did serve by the way. Oh and you are right elements are missing. That was deliberate as I tried to work within the word count constraint. I agree it could be better with more editing but I am fighting a nasty sinus infection and do not have any more energy for it. Next Jam I will be better prepared. I had one beta reader to help with the editing so there was that. I am also going to add to the story in the next Jam making it a series kind of thing. I mean what happened to Sgt Wong? Will he make it through Storm Trooper Selection course?