Thank you so much for taking time to read this story. I agree entirely with all your points. This was really my first ever experience with creative writing, and the one page constraint really humbled many of my initial ideas put to page. I’m really glad I was able to participate in this event and really look forward to future events to see if I can hone in a bit better.
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The only way we grow is through mindful repetition. Creative writing is a tough thing sometimes, even for those with “training” in it. Your brain has to be in it most times, and jump starting that process can be hit or miss. If this was your first attempt at such a thing, it didn’t come across that way. Keep at it. Before long you’ll have grand tales spun that will carry weight and deliver the hammer blows where needed.