Hello and thank you very much for your feedback! I played your game 2 times, and will give you my feedback now.
At first, your game is nice to play, kinda interesting and has quite some potential I think. I like that it is different to most other games. Also, the writing is interesting. I saw that there is an option in the menu for music volume, but I was not able to hear any music. Some nice music would make this game much more enjoyable I think.
The font that you are using for the menu and buttons on the right side is looking nice, but also is a bit hard to read.
For some reason I was not able to meet allura at noon in the garden. Maybe you could add a clock to the screen (I know there is a text showing some time, but I dont get it, it seems not to be the actual time).
The weakest part of the game are the graphics (Maybe this is more important for me because I´m graphics designer). Here is a lot of potential for improvement. It does not have to look superb, but a few more Details and cleaner outlines would help a lot.
Also, I would reduce the height of the lower text window a bit.