Had a lot of fun with this, I hope you do more! Honestly, it’s encouraging to hear your struggle, I keep wanting to try stronger (aka any) story and plot but end up focusing on mechanics or some learning some tech. And the reality is most jam games fall short of what we aimed for.
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Thanks for the kind words. It was fun working on a story as it was something I had never done before. I think one mistake I had was not figuring out my whole plot and what I wanted to do. Because of that I kept second guessing everything I wrote and changing it over and over without making progress. Next time I will make sure to storyboard my main points so I know the direction I want to take it.